I have received feedback about the things I need to change in chapter 2
I need

I have received feedback about the things I need to change in chapter 2
I need to add a conclusion, what difficulties I’ve overcome, what results I’ve received, and relate it all convincingly to the points in the Introduction and Chapter 1. Add myself as the author to it, it should need more facts about my respondents, more descriptions of them, more detailed analysis of my practice with them. Add more facts and details, more tables with descriptions.
I have added the paper and the responses to the survey i have conducted