I do not want to rate a person with 1 star, so please, if you are not a profess

I do not want to rate a person with 1 star, so please, if you are not a professional and don’t know how to answer this, do not make a request.
Edit an answer I received from an unprofessional tutor. Here are the files: 1, 2, and 3 are screenshots of the question, and the Gradess file contains the grade I received along with the professor’s comment about the answer. Please read the comment and edit the answer to improve it as much as possible, as I need a full grade for this. If I receive the full grade, I will tip you.