Hello,
I am doing my master’s degree graduation paper (architecture major). And

Hello,
I am doing my master’s degree graduation paper (architecture major). And my paper is a multi-case study research with a comparative analysis. The topic is about Universal design.
I already have the paper done from a different order. But it is not the best.
I will upload the sections that should be in the paper, and my professor’s feedbacks and comments.
What i want is:
1. In the paper, we should have 5 case studies. As you can see they are overviews not case studies. It is so random and lacks architectural and technical data. It should talk about architectural elements. So i want you to dig deeper in the case studies.
2. The analysis parts is not good. It should be comparative analysis on the cases to give us learnings how can we apply universal design in Riyadh city by adapting the applications from the case studies.
3. I will need you to go through the whole paper since the beginning and organizing it as it is not structured at all, plus the professor had some minor comments on each section which i want you to capture.
Overall, i chose 6 pages for you to be able to go through the whole paper and do the case studies and analysis part.
You can use as much sources as you need.
If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.