Abstract to be written sample is attached 
(Existing can be removed) 
Scope to b

Abstract to be written sample is attached 
(Existing can be removed) 
Scope to be written and sample of scope is uploaded should not be bullet pointed (please remove the current and write it)
Chapter 3- please add a new picture with reference (Saunders onion)
Add introduction to chapter 4 starting with analysis and findings and discussion,  this chapter should review each objective and see how well it was achieved or partially achieved then add conclusions and recommendations for further research  (sample attached)
Add something about mode of analysis in chapter 4 and also reliability and validity 
Diagram to be added in  conceptual framework that 2.4- conceptualising the variable that is considered (sample is attached) Add 3 diagrams