This paper is a revision of Rough Draft 1 and must be 2 full pages and include a

This paper is a revision of Rough Draft 1 and must be 2 full pages and include a separate works cited page.
Paper must discuss the argument of the article and summarize the main points. Please use actual quotes from the article. One quote per paragraph is needed. NO OUTSIDE RESEARCH in this paper. Remember that all quotes must be followed by the correct page number from the text.
No opinions or references to yourself in this paper.
Your final paper must be 2 full pages. Anything circled or crossed out must be removed or corrected. 
Rough draft attatched below