I basicaly need a complete feedback for the thesis before handing in as I can no

I basicaly need a complete feedback for the thesis before handing in as I can not get it from my supervisor anymore. This are the most importat thigs I need to check:
-can you check if all the questions (managerial and academical makes sence)
(when considering the model and the proposal)
-can you check the consistency of the text?
-does the content makes sence overall?
-can you give me feedback fot the analysis if it makes sence?
– my supervisor said the analysis should be process macro, is it ok to include the other analysis?
-check everything is included based on the thesis handbook